Am Betrayed!
Wednesday, April 12, 2006
You came into my life
And I thought you would be my wife
We both were in love
I was flying high with cloud full of dove
That cloud turned out to be my blunder
What it gave me was a thunder
Thanks to you now I'm dead
All my dreams are now just shred
Now I'm even afraid of sleeping
I fear I would again start dreaming
I still don't know what were you thinking
When my heart was sinking
May god give you all the happiness
And let me deal with all the mess
No, I don't need your consolation
What I need is some isolation
Heart says I want to cry
But my eyes are dry
Yet again am betrayed!
And I thought you would be my wife
We both were in love
I was flying high with cloud full of dove
That cloud turned out to be my blunder
What it gave me was a thunder
Thanks to you now I'm dead
All my dreams are now just shred
Now I'm even afraid of sleeping
I fear I would again start dreaming
I still don't know what were you thinking
When my heart was sinking
May god give you all the happiness
And let me deal with all the mess
No, I don't need your consolation
What I need is some isolation
Heart says I want to cry
But my eyes are dry
Yet again am betrayed!
posted by Shashank at 2:19 PM
23 Comments:
sahi hai .... ek hi gaana yaad aa raha hai aab mujhe...
"Jubah pe dard bhari daastaan chali aayi" !!
what is this ??
leave it, shut it, forget it !!
When life gives you lemons, say,"Sure, I like lemons, what else ya got?"
Oye.. fir wahi!!! forgive and forget is a wise man's way of living..
It may be a coincidence but the one that I have written (conscious dream) was in general... now its dedicated to you! :)
Good...!!!but not as good as LIFE KA LESSON! was..!!!
BTW acha likha hai.. If its a fact that you aren't resurrecting..
I won't like you to think of past..
@ Manish, Rusty
Oye yeh to ek aise hi time pass kavita thi bhai!!! Kahe senti ho rahe ho :-P
again the same morose topic...common be a man...:D
@Sassu
Jo hota hai woh dikhta nahi hai aur jo dikhta hai wo hota nahi hai! ;)
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@ anonymous
Please don't indulge in name game! Just a plain and simple request.
Isn't it irony that you are hiding your own name and taking out others!
Sorry for it but I had to delete ur comment!
Dear Wally,
I think you have amply demonstrated your potential for writing mind-numbingly inane doggerels. Yes, we get it, you are an awfully bad poet. If you like, I could forward your nomination for the annual 'High Prosthetic Vogon Jeltz' award for atrocious verse.
That settled, could we now have a more meaningful post from you? (I know you are capable of it).
@badgirl
Tumne meri aankhien khol di!
shashank bhai..yaar sentiaap choro aur nayi gaadi main sawaar ho...life bahut hassen hai:)...
uska chala jana tumeh kabool nahi
usse chahna tumhari bhool nahi
apne dil ko yun ruswa na karo
dil, dil hai, pairon ki dhool nahi
To kya hua agar hum reh na sake saath,
To kya hua agar aaj nahi pakad sakta mein uska haath
Lekin aaj bhi karti hai woh mera fikra,
Yeh baat woh nahi karegi kabhi kisi se jikra
Jeena mujhko sheekhaya usi ne,
Ek acha insaan banaya mujhe usi ne
...
I still care for her!
God bless her!
ki hoya puttar..na na dil chota nahi karte...sapna,shanti,bhavna to hai hi..dheere dheere or aa jaayengi..tu tension na le...train,bus or ladki..yaad hai na wo dialgue..arre dil chata hai ka..bus yaad rakha kar...cheer up kido..life is much more than all this..:D phir mai ta hoon hi...tujhe hasaan waste...
woh dil chahata ka dialogue tha ???
I thought ISHQ ka dialogue hai :-?
Yes yes yes!
Woh ISHQ ka dialouge hai! But moral is "Bhawanao ko samjho" ;-).
Now don't start ki bhawana kaun hai???
Aur ye bhavna kaun hai? Bar bar Stellar chipka rahi hai zabardasti!! :P
Mein himmat nahi haarne waala... aaj nahi to kal jaroor milegi mujhe bhi koi Bhavana ;-) jo mere bhavanao ko samjhegi!
shanky tum kavita bhi likhte ho!!
i hope the girl read these lines.
good one.
waise shanky
ab bata bhi dei
Yeh bhawana hai kaun ????
;-p
shanky bangaya..poet man!!real good kavita ..comin ur way..i loved it..
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